Mar 12, 2007

Practice Makes Past Perfect

Stamping of naked feet on marbled floors,
The echo of lines from empty classroom doors,
 
Imagined sets and a ghost stage,
Markings on a battered page.,
 
Blinding lights and hidden eyes,
Revealed by laughs or by sighs,
 
Stench of anticipation and the taste of joy,
Slaps on the back and a few compliments coy,
 
To have lived all that, now life seems pale,
I would rather live in some one else's tale.
 
 
 
Hasn't he run out of sento yet, you say? [:D]
 
 
 
 
 

15 comments:

  1. How is one not to appreciate , if one has had a similar overlapping life? eh?

    Accha hai. :)

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  2. @suddu
    [:)] glad i could touch a few chords

    @anon
    I take it as a compliment friend, thanks!

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  3. i never said that these lines are good[:P]
    waise i think u can write much better than that.

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  4. @anon
    man na padega dost ...tumhara har jawab la jawab hota hai...aise shatir dimag waale log humara blog padhte hain, jaan ke badi khushi hui.

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  5. i am another anon ... :D

    i think i have to copy sudarshan's lines ...

    as one of the appreciators of ur blogs i would not like to see anymore of these ... :) .. well the more u tell the more u .... u know what ...

    and WOW ....

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  6. @anon-2
    well first of all I can't fugure out the reason for this sudden spurt of anonymous commentors...anyways...mr/ms. anon i couldn't quite get what you are saying; at one point you say you are an appreciator, then you say you would NOT like to see anymore of these then again you say "WOW" (in caps too! thanks for that!!) ...please help me be a little less confused...

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  7. sandy ur getting popular... so many anonymous comments looks like girls dont want to reveal their love for u[:P]

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  8. @abhishek
    hmmm..fanciful imagination my dear friend, lekin hum abhi yahi soch lete hain, sochne mein kya jataa hai [:P]

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  9. anon-2 here ...

    sry for always being unclear ...

    it was a great piece of writing ... and i liked it a lot ...

    i am anonymous because i wanna comment "the cause" or "the reason" for such beautiful but painful poem ... and what i wanted to tell was that .. the more u express ur pains through such (beautiful) pieces the more u become susceptible to it and the longer u will take to run out of it ...

    well IF this poem was not born in ur heart and a total work of ur brain then i am sorry ... i misinterpreted ...

    by the way ppl enjoy such pieces of ones misery and also i think u would enjoy their comments ... i did the same again and again ... but then with time it makes more loser of one self ...

    anyways ... bloggers kaa kaam hota hii hai funda maarna .. mai kuchh jyada maar diya .. sry .. and i will understand if u say me to keep my mouth shut next time :)

    and the poem was really touching as i said i would like to copy sudarshan's words ... :)

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  10. nice but painful poem... very touching....
    :)

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  11. @anon-2
    hmm...
    @shweta
    [:)] thank u jee!

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  12. let's swap tales :)
    its the same ... ur or mine ..

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  13. @advocatus

    hmm...kya karien c'est la vie!

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  14. really nice sandy!
    Though I know tha a couple of years down the line I will appreciate it more..

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  15. Hi Sandeep,
    Chandan gave URL to ur blog. Too much poem. bahut hi maarmik. aur bahut hi achhchhee kavitaa.

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