Mar 10, 2006

Sirf aur sirf ... ek chocolate ke liye!!!!

THE BACKGROUND:

Guta Singh, my wingie, ate a chocolate that I had been preserving for many many days. On discovering that my prized possession was now all gone, I guess I was a little harsh on him.

When I came back I saw this on his blog. Check out my reply and especially check out my hindi :D.


sirf aur sirf ..ek chocolate ke liye!!!!!!!!

@uddu..
do read sandeep rath's comment after this..

kaise kaise dost hote hain jo hote hain sirf aur sirf ......
ek chocolate ke liye
dhikkar hai unki jindagi pe jo hote hain sirf .......
ek chocolate ke liye
dost ne dost ko kuch bhi bak diya sirf aur sirf...........
ek chocolate ke liye
4 saal ki dosti pal me bhula di sirf aur sirf.....
ek chocolate ke liye
saala chutiya types roya sirf aur sirf .............
ek chocolate ke liye
bolta hai tune khaye..ab paise do, sirf aur sirf..
ek chocolate ke liye
saale ne sharm haya sab bech khaayi sirf aur sirf
ek chocolate ke liye


Maine bhi soch liya,rone do saale ko sirf aur sirf
usi chocolate ke liye.....
Nahin dunga ek bhi paisa....
us chocolate ke liye!!!!!! :D

MY REPLY:

aisa hua ki 3 din se tha aankh sek rahaa,
khaane ki chah ko daba ke baitha rahaa

lekin ek din, jab wapas ayaa karke apna kaam,
toh poore 100gm mein bache sirf 2gm,

sutte peene waalon, aisa laga ki aakhri sutte ko koi pee gayaa,
mere cadbury orange chocolate ko koi behrami se kha gayaa,

lekin dost, agar gusse mein maine ho aisa kuch keh diya,
dubara aisa na karoonga yeh maine pran liya,

to yeh dost tumhara hai maangta maafi,
ab hans bhi do gussa ho gayaa kaafi :D
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14 comments:

  1. SouvikFriday, March 10, 2006 1:47:00 PM

    wah wah!!! la"jawab"

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  2. Sudarshan. A. G.Friday, March 10, 2006 3:19:00 PM

    First hindi poem which touched me (rather which i fully understood) after a loong time! :))))

    Amazing... Aap tho shero-shayari bhi karte hai... yeh tho humein maloom hi na tha..

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  3. Sudarshan. A. G.Friday, March 10, 2006 3:21:00 PM

    read it again...

    it just so very succinctly describes 'yaari' :)...

    Kudos both u jobless characters! :D

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  4. SunnyFriday, March 10, 2006 5:37:00 PM

    Waah waah... waah waah [:D]

    Having difficulty deciding which is more hoohaa... the incident or the documentation of the incident! [:D]

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  5. AnonymousFriday, March 10, 2006 5:56:00 PM

    waaah ... kya jugalbandi hai !!!

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  6. Arvind IyerFriday, March 10, 2006 8:12:00 PM

    The chocolate would have been flattered by all this attention...had it been alive this day :)

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  7. Mugger MuchSaturday, March 11, 2006 12:26:00 AM

    Dude! Lovely couplets!! Hahhaha!
    Am still laughing away!
    Adding you to my blogroll...!

    And, yes, thanks for the comments! I try my best to please!

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  8. WerewolfishSaturday, March 11, 2006 3:39:00 AM

    Good stuff....
    Carlton

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  9. umangSaturday, March 11, 2006 4:49:00 AM

    do yaar pehle jhagde
    aur phir hui sulah..
    har raat ke baad aaye
    aisi hi meethi subah :)

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  10. zxcvSaturday, March 11, 2006 12:30:00 PM

    Guta ka to sahi main nahi hai jawab
    Par tujhe kyu mil raha hai faltu mein khitab
    Pata nahi kya laga poem main logon ko khas
    Mere hisab se to hai yeh total bakwas

    Out of courtesy idhar sabne tarif kar di
    Phule hue gubare main aur hawa bhar di
    Lakin poem ki asli yeh hai aukaat
    Ki uske liye tujhe padne chaiye 2 4 laat

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  11. SouvikSaturday, March 11, 2006 2:11:00 PM

    i tagged u ... chk out the rules on my last post

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  12. meenakshiMonday, March 13, 2006 6:11:00 PM

    grr....tagging u for the same topic as above....why is kgp such a small place???

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  13. Deepak VermaFriday, March 17, 2006 12:45:00 PM

    wah arnav kya baat hai !!!
    Great work ..


    and UDDU great try...

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  14. Avinash singhSaturday, March 25, 2006 4:23:00 AM

    sahi me yaar.. apun ka dost sab to hindi me god ho gaya hai..

    first surprise uddu himself now arnav... ab to bahut lamba material mil jaayega ..ek final sab ka poetry jor ke post karne ke liye :)

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